As algae said, the background and the props are too busy.
Some is okay, too much distracts from the doll you want to sell.
Brick wall is great, Lattice with leaves is too much.
The cushion with ornaments is nice but in that setting I would rather have a less flashy one. The vase on the table partially obstructs your model. Maybe when the flowers were scattered on the table without the vase.
Second picture - her right hand is twisted in a wrong way. If you would try to pose like that it would be uncomfortable. Eye contact is great.
Like the second one more.
Jo
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